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[AoDnightshade]	Posted: October 13, 2009 02:40 pm
Official "Worse GFXer" of FEND Group: Moderator Posts: 609 Member No.: 8 Joined: December 09, 2007	~~Nice Hair~~ I think the right strap(our POV) could use alittle more shading but that could just be me. btw, i think the second one looks best, the gold colors give the lower half of the mug some flair but just enough to catch the eye. -------------------- watched anime ;D \| Deviant Art \| FEND Art
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[Nayr]	Posted: October 13, 2009 10:49 pm
Shantastic :D Group: Member Posts: 293 Member No.: 204 Joined: June 12, 2009	I need some feedback on the children of Eirika and Seth that I made. -------------------- Fe6 Mug Enhancement Project - Click here.
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[DuPont Identity]	Posted: October 13, 2009 11:14 pm
A string cup of coffee Group: Veterans Posts: 1,059 Member No.: 22 Joined: December 10, 2007	I would make the back of Aaron's hair bigger, and the back of Shirley's hair curve inwards a little. The near side of Aaron's cape could use more shading too. This is just me, but I'd make Shirley's shoulderplates smaller, since large shoulderplates in general make people's shoulders look wide.
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Posted: October 16, 2009 12:42 pm

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Bro. Your heads are TOO SMALL.

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QUOTE (Miss Tama @ Dec 2, 2008 12:04 AM)

You still need to shade according to the light source, not just the shadows from the clothing.

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Posted: October 16, 2009 01:13 pm

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QUOTE (Bonestorm99 @ October 16, 2009 04:42 pm)

Bro. Your heads are TOO SMALL.

No, I didn't change the head size when I did the splicing so proportionally they should be correct. Its just the bulbous pads and cloak make their bodies look larger.

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[Vampire Elf]	Posted: October 17, 2009 01:38 pm
FENDer Group: Member Posts: 737 Member No.: 185 Joined: April 16, 2009	@Nayr: I find it very hard to cnc your work because whenever I do all I get in responce are excuses That aside, the boy's neck is pillowy and the hair shading is rough -------------------- [FEP Sprite Topic\|FE Spritez Sprite Topic\|Graficos Santuario Sprite Topic\|FEND Sprite Topic]
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[Vampire Elf]	Posted: November 03, 2009 04:06 pm
FENDer Group: Member Posts: 737 Member No.: 185 Joined: April 16, 2009	and (personally, I prefer the first, then 3rd then the second) cnc please -------------------- [FEP Sprite Topic\|FE Spritez Sprite Topic\|Graficos Santuario Sprite Topic\|FEND Sprite Topic]
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[ShinyCharmander]	Posted: November 03, 2009 06:01 pm
~~Ooooh...Did I win?~~ Group: Member Posts: 424 Member No.: 158 Joined: March 07, 2009	Older Eirika: I'm not sure...but the near eye looks too far to the left. Maybe one pixel to the right? -------------------- Lo que no te mata, te hace fuerte... ~~Dang you BloodFalcon22...~~ so i herd u liek mudkipzz?
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[Vampire Elf]	Posted: November 03, 2009 06:42 pm
FENDer Group: Member Posts: 737 Member No.: 185 Joined: April 16, 2009	Tried to fix that, and made a few other adjustments -------------------- [FEP Sprite Topic\|FE Spritez Sprite Topic\|Graficos Santuario Sprite Topic\|FEND Sprite Topic]
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[Vampire Elf]	Posted: November 12, 2009 08:11 pm
FENDer Group: Member Posts: 737 Member No.: 185 Joined: April 16, 2009	KK just need a bit of cnc on ~~quite~~ a few mugs for the fe4 project (already have cnc on lana but more couldnt hurt ) -------------------- [FEP Sprite Topic\|FE Spritez Sprite Topic\|Graficos Santuario Sprite Topic\|FEND Sprite Topic]
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[NoetherianRing]	Posted: November 12, 2009 09:00 pm
SURPRISE Group: Member Posts: 241 Member No.: 176 Joined: March 29, 2009	Loputosu!Julius looks pretty gosh darn nice now. Any future fixing is up to your discretion, really. Le'en shoulders are too sharp for a woman, they should be more rounded. Ethlin's head feels kind of small, but I'd have to compare to some actual FE mugs to say for sure and I'm too lazy to do that right now. Claude's eyes looks pretty asian and lack the serenity that matches his personality, and I can't really say what you should do to fix that. Julia's pink undershirt is kinda bland and almost pillow shady near the far side. It also looks deformed there as well since there's no reason it should stretch like that. For the rest I don't really have much to say at the moment so yeah :V -------------------- "Somewhere in the multiverse, a bad slashfic is written about this moment."
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[Vampire Elf]	Posted: November 12, 2009 09:48 pm
FENDer Group: Member Posts: 737 Member No.: 185 Joined: April 16, 2009	Just saw blackavar's claude quits editing nayrs claude, sry nayr -------------------- [FEP Sprite Topic\|FE Spritez Sprite Topic\|Graficos Santuario Sprite Topic\|FEND Sprite Topic]
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